Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my disappointment in the shipping services that I availed from your company on June 1, 2019. The shipment was from Bangalore to Ontario and the consignment number is A0056754.
Let me explain the damages to some electrical appliances that were a part of the consignment. Firstly, the compressor of my Samsung refrigerator model 5473 has broken and the fridge is not functional. Secondly, the motherboard of my Whirlpool washing machine model 7893 has a short circuit and the buttons are not operational. It has become increasingly difficult for me to store the groceries and do the laundry without these appliances.
Would you kindly arrange for the repair or the replacement of the appliances as detailed in the transit insurance that I purchased from your company. I would appreciate if you could email the insurance agent in Ontario and send a copy of the email to my email address worker@gmail.com
Looking forward to a prompt response and a replacement of the appliances at the earliest.
Yours faithfully,
Rajie
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13068181818 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12703962365 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619318181818 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8925765999 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.333333333 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107595310421 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0376295560369 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446734057351 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.050657449079 0.12726935374 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466235352538 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 8.71597938144 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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