Technology has made children less creative than before
There is no shortage of debates about whether technology has participated negatively to reduce the creativity of our children. In the past, children were so genuine and depended mostly on their common sense, practical reasoning, and intellectual ability. However, some people believe that the young generation is more creative than children in the past due to advancement in technology. I strongly agree that technology has made children less creative than they were in the past, for the reasons that I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, technology prevents children from interacting with their peers. interaction through playing and discussion has a tremendous impact on child creativity and intellectual ability. most of our young generation spend their time at home, either to surf the internet or play video games Instead of going outside to physically interact with their friends. I remember when I was a child, I spent most of my leisure time to play with my friends outdoor. we built little houses out of rocks and leaves. we even construct a tree house from simple materials which were available in the nature around us. although some people still hold the idea that children nowadays are more creative than children in the past, I will continue to hold the opposite notion.
Moreover, technology has limited our children capability to think efficiently. although, many tools are provided and ready to use yet young generation lack logical reasoning to solve their problems and provide solutions. For this reason, depending on technological tools in education is one of the worst drawbacks in education. For instance, when I was a student, I use to read books and go thoroughly through problems and equations in math and try to solve them on my own depending mostly on my knowledge and reasoning. my Kids on the other hand, whenever they confront failure to find a solution for their homeworks, they run into their laptops and surf for solutions. Hence, when we solve problems on our own we could use our brain effectively and productively to find a rational solution. that is why I advocate that children in the past were more creative than children nowadays.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08587257618 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78599584587 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534626038781 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2375098264 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0555555556 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61111111111 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275738257564 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960987191415 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115837456063 0.0737576698707 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214535645402 0.150856017488 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125790018401 0.0645574589148 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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