There have been some problems with public transport in your area recently.
Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter
> describe the problems
> explain how these problems are affecting the public
> suggest what changes could be made
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to let you know about the issues in the public transportation in my locality. For the past two weeks, residents in our neighborhood have been facing difficulties in commuting to different places from home. I would like to bring to your attention, the hurdles which we face daily for travelling to offices, schools and other workplaces in the peak hours.
Since Metro Rail maintenance is going on for past few weeks, many people in our area find it difficult to commute in the morning and evening during rush hours. There has been very less frequency of buses to nearby places and business districts, which will affect the travel of everyone including office goers and students. In order to solve this problem, we request you to arrange for more buses during peak hours to commute, until the metro terminal maintenance project completes. This in turn will not only facilitate the transportation but also reduce the traffic, since many would opt to travel in public buses instead of using their own vehicles. Could you please consider this request and take the necessary measures as soon as possible. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
Arun
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nd other workplaces in the peak hours. Since Metro Rail maintenance is going on...
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...d to hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely, ...
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Suggestion:
... Yours Sincerely, Arun
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0637254902 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58427727666 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656862745098 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.3562578426 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.3 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126131639762 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465124589565 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404849556997 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763898360503 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475795832818 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.