The bar chart shows the number of magazines sold per person in 5 countries in 3 different years.
The given bar chart below illustrate the number of magazines sold per person in 5 different countries in 2000 and 2010, with the forcasted sales in 2020
On the whole, A is the countries which sold the most magazines during the time surveyed, meanwhile E had the least people reading magazines compared to the remaining countries.
A and B had a similar downward trend of the amount of magazines sold each individual from 2000 to 2010 by 5 and 6 respectively. A alike pattern had shown in country C with a significant drop from just over 40 in 2000 to more than 30 in 2010. All of countries are predicted to go down of the figure of magazines traded in 2020 with the country A will decline at marginally above 40, followed by country B, the most fall belongs to country C at 30.
On the other hand, country D witnessed a slight decrease of the magazines wholesaled size in the first 10 years at over 20 in 2010 and that figure keeps increasing at nearly 30 in 2020. In the same time, country E where had the least sales of magazines, which rose markedly at more than 20 in 2010, estimated to dip back to about 15 in 2020.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
...m 2000 to 2010 by 5 and 6 respectively. A alike pattern had shown in country C wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, while, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36666666667 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58044714788 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.6837189015 43.030603864 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.833333333 112.824112599 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.0 22.9334400587 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 5.23603664747 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281162051512 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135169731156 0.103423049105 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13986503174 0.0843802449381 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213647755709 0.15604864568 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159988803974 0.0819641961636 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.2329268293 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.33 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.66 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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