You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
give details of your study plans
explain why you want to get a part-time job
suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Jonas,
I hope you are doing well. The last time when we met in Mumbai was awesome during your vacation. I am writing this letter to seek information to do a part-time job in Australia. I am following your footsteps and decided to join for an MBA course at the University of Melbourne.
Fortunately, I got the admission in the college and course duration will be for 3 years'. Accommodation and the fees have already been paid to the college. The course will be on weekdays from Morning from 9.00AM to 06.00PM, post that I will have time to work.
I have heard from many of our common friends that Melbourne is quite expensive. my parents have somehow managed to pay the fees and I don't want to put an extra burden on them. As you know that this is for the first time I am visiting Melbourne, I would need your help to search for some suitable jobs in that vicinity, so that I can manage my daily living.
Looking forward to your suggestions.
Best Regards,
Pankaj Khubchandani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 81, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...ends that Melbourne is quite expensive. my parents have somehow managed to pay the...
^^
Line 9, column 135, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e somehow managed to pay the fees and I dont want to put an extra burden on them. As...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59444444444 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59493214545 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644444444444 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.919780092 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.9166666667 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252428837279 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769559685061 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773648374314 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141553678668 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872302121122 0.0580467560999 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.75 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.