DISCUSS WHEATHER DESIGN OD BUILDING WILL HAVE A POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE IMPACTR ON PEOPLE LIFE OR WORK
this The important of topic which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this nation .This essay will elaborate both aspects tread and this will lead a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reason which will furthers explain this arguments but the most preponderant one steams form fact that …….consequently instance ….. Another pivotal aspect for this argument is that …Needless to say that all these merits stands …in a good stead.
However there are some pitfalls that negate this arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this tread but the most alarming is that ………. As a result .as illustration ……besides …Hence it is apparent why many are against
According to the arguments aforementioned above reach a conclusion that the benefit of ………… are instrumental indeed . Nevertheless, the potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, hence, however, look, nevertheless, so, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 31.9359605911 34% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 1207.87684729 70% => OK
No of words: 151.0 242.827586207 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60927152318 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.92707691288 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1119394666 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 139.433497537 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.708609271523 0.580463131201 122% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 379.143842365 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6551724138 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.5505663843 50.4703680194 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.166666667 104.977214359 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.9669160288 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.3333333333 7.25397266985 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.33497536946 544% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0543116188267 0.242375264174 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0227052810546 0.0925447433944 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0248690442093 0.071462118173 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0295500640827 0.151781067708 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234720607058 0.0609392437508 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 12.6369458128 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 11.5310837438 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.5123152709 171% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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