Government is spending money on health care education. Which sector do you think government should be spending in?

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Government is spending money on health care education. Which sector do you think government should be spending in?

The importance of health care which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject of this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my view for favoring the positive effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

There are merits of reasons which will further explain this arguments but the most important one stems from fact is that government should provide the education in all villages because all people known the self defense. Another potential aspect of this trend is that old people resign the job than young people can work. Needless to say, that all these merits stand in a good stead.

Elaborating my viewpoint, there are some more merits but one of the crucial effects is that government is spending money on health care education than people know who to live in anywhere. Moreover, it solves the problems and less unemployment. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favors of this trend.

According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach a conclusion that the benefits of health care are indeed too great to ignore.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, moreover, so, thus, while, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 220.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03181818182 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62408976741 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4348879377 50.4703680194 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.636363636 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145563481799 0.242375264174 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464076613257 0.0925447433944 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664325176026 0.071462118173 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893370335458 0.151781067708 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490588148393 0.0609392437508 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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