Write about the following topic:
Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
In the last ten decades, the computer is sometimes considered as one of the major developments, and I do completely agree with this point of view as it helps people connect with each other and offers some benefits to make life easier.
First of all, computers bring everyone together. With the explosive growth of the Internet, now people can use their computer to read online articles about world affairs, or long-distance communication, such as. At present, people can contact one another on social networking sites like Facebook and Twitter. This is especially useful for families that spread over a wider geographical area; if parents want to talk with their children studying abroad, they just turn on their computer, log in their Facebook and start to chat with them. If we look back on many years ago, we had to buy newspaper to catch up with the news and write letters to exchange information with our relatives, which was costly and time-consuming.
Another point I want to make is that computers can be a valuable tool to aid everybody with their tasks. For one thing, it can store our data and documents. Long time ago, our ancestors had a lot of shelves in the house to keep written materials, pictures and books. But now, computers with great capacity can store thousands of files and save space in our home. Moreover, a manufacturer like IBM has created a great number of supercomputers for NASA to calculate the complex formulas so that scientists are able to draw up sound plans for astronauts to fly into space with modern spacecraft.
In conclusion, computers have been an important invention in human history. It not only functions as a form of communication but also has some utilities to please the contemporary world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, so, in conclusion, such as, first of all, for one thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91554054054 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81397423013 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641891891892 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3626007764 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.923076923 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14300436215 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477264055406 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348580165966 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0874674137291 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219173341478 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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