The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.
The diagram illustrates the process making bricks for building industry.
Overall, there are seven main stages in the brick producing process, beginning with digging clay and ending with the delivery of bricks to the users.
First of all, clay is moved to metal by digger. Afterwards, the clay is moved to metal grid, and putted it through a sieve then it passes into the roller. Then the clay is mixed sand and water. After that, the bricks are made from the lay by the mould or the wire cutter. In the following stage, they are moved to dying oven for 24 to 48 hours.
Those bricks are fired in the kiln at a moderate temperature from 2000 C to 9800C then they are transfered to other kiln with a high temperature (8700C-13000C). In the next stages, they are treated in the cooling chamber for 48 to 72 hours. Finally, the bricks are packed and transported to customers.
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- The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry. 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 48, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
... all, clay is moved to metal by digger. after wards, the clay is moved to metal grid,...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Then
...a sieve then it passes into the roller. then the clay is mixed sand and water. after...
^^^^
Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
... then the clay is mixed sand and water. after that, the bricks are made from the lay ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 716.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53164556962 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31579848185 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563291139241 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3073719257 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.6 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203519516843 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904991511878 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144540777888 0.0843802449381 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188492876792 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.187711130625 0.0819641961636 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.2329268293 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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