The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
The picture illustrates the stages and equipment used in the production of bricks for the building industry.
Overall, bricks manufacturing undergoes several steps beginning with digging up clay and ending with delivery finished products.
The first stage of bricks production is digging up clay from the ground with the help of the digger. Subsequently, this clay goes through the gird made of metal to break up into smaller particles under the assistant of the roller. In the following step, those clay particles are mixed with sand and water. Afterwards, this mixture is given the shape of bricks by using either wire cutter or mould. The next step is heating these bricks in drying oven during the period of 24-48 hours. Then, they are heated continuously in the kiln under the temperature from moderate level to high level, before being carried to cooling chamber for 48-72 hours. Lastly, the last products are packaged and delivered to be ready for commercial.
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- The charts below show the percentage of school-aged boys and girls in secondary school and higher education in four region in the world in 2000. 73
- The bar chart present the percentage of changing cars in 2009 in an European country. 78
- The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. 78
- The responsibility for protecting and reducing global environmental damage lies with politicians as there is very little that the individual can do this Do you agree or disagree 73
- People are surrounded by all kinds of advertising Some people believe that advertising has a negative effect on people s lives To what extent do you agree or disagree 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...r. Subsequently, this clay goes through the gird made of metal to break up into smaller ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, lastly, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 815.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12578616352 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53806120443 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641509433962 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4439775869 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5555555556 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21996957662 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960216662308 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135228479084 0.0843802449381 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217518664944 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.175776824032 0.0819641961636 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.