You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems.
Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter:
explain your situation
describe your problems
tell him/her when you think you can start
Dear Sir,
I would like to thank you for the opportunity for joining your esteemed company "Lovelock and Lewis" as a Finance Manager. My date of joining was preagreed to be on 7 August 2019.
I am currently serving my notice period with my current company "Thomson Reuters". In my current company, my job involves up-keeping and continuously monitoring our ERP systems. During the audit process, we have discovered some technical failures in the system and have reported it to our consultants. Our consultants have provided us with a timeline to fix the system within 3 weeks. The company’s CFO has requested me to extend my notice period my 1 week to resolve this issue. Since, I am the only person involved in this task, I would be my morally responsible to help them in accomplishing the task before I leave. I would ask you to please accommodate this genuine request of delaying my joining by 1 week. I will be able to join my new position in your company the latest by 15th August 2019. Hoping you will understand my critical situation and allow my late joining.
Yours sincerely,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 739, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'company the latest'.
Suggestion: company the latest
...be able to join my new position in your company latest by 15th August 2019. Hoping you will...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98387096774 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07839246579 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629032258065 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8576669689 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2727272727 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.181818181818 4.34317383033 4% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1567115803 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723370366192 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624215959155 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116908001272 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0138023142672 0.0580467560999 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.