You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have
some problems.
Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter
•
explain your situation
•
describe your problems
• tell him/her when you think you can start.
DEAR SIR,
I AM WRITING THIS LETTER IN REGARDS TO MY JOINING IN THE COMPANY THAT WAS SCHEDULED TO BE ON THIS FRIDAY THAT IS 18\11\19.
I WOULD LIKE TO BRING TO YOUR NOTICE, THAT I WAS INSTRUCTED TO EMBARK MY DUTIES IN THE OFFICE ON 18\11\19. UNFORTUNATELY, I WON’T BE ABLE TO START MY NEW JOB FROM THE AUTHORISED DATE.
I AM REALLY VERY SORRY FOR THE INCONVENIENCE AND INSINCERITY IN FOLLOWING THE GUIDELINES FROM THE BEGINNING OF NEW OPPORTUNITY ITSELF. I AM ENFORCED TO DO SUCH A SHAMEFUL ACT AS THERE HAVE SOME UNCERTANITIES OCCURRED IN MY FAMILY WHICH CANNOT BE NEGLECTED. MY MOTHER HAS BEEN HOSPITALISED DUE TO LOW BLOOD PRESSURE. SHE IS KEPT UNDER OBSERVANCE FOR TWO DAYS. THEREFORE, I WILL HAVE TO STAY BACK WITH HER AS THERE IS NOBODY ELSE IN MY FAMILY TO SUPPORT HER.
LASTLY, I ASSURE TO RESUME TO WORK BY 21\11\19 WITHOUT FAIL. I UNDERSTAND THAT PROFESSIONAL LIFE SHOULDN’T BE DISRUPTED BY ANY PERSONAL ISSUES BUT THIS IS AN UNAVOIDABLE SITUATION. ALTHOUGH, I PROMISE THAT I WON’T REPEAT ANY SUCH WRONG ACTS IN FUTURE.I LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR APPOLOGY.
YOURS SINCERELY
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
DEAR SIR, I AM WRITING THIS LETTER IN REGARDS TO M...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 26, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: Regarding; With regard to
...EAR SIR, I AM WRITING THIS LETTER IN REGARDS TO MY JOINING IN THE COMPANY THAT WAS SCHE...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 252, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'IN the FUTURE'?
Suggestion: IN the FUTURE
...I WON'T REPEAT ANY SUCH WRONG ACTS IN FUTURE.I LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR APPOLOGY. YOUR...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 262, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...;T REPEAT ANY SUCH WRONG ACTS IN FUTURE.I LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR APPOLOGY. YOURS ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, lastly, look, really, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85863874346 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01652475818 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649214659686 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5102763697 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3636363636 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147181745739 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578049722922 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559372018511 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763103583085 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387920506405 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 7.59969072165 125% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.