As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems ,the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate
As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems ,the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. In today’s world everyone has relied on technology for their own purpose of work ,and as the technology advances there will be certain advantages regarding solving the people their problem and disadvantages which may lead the person in the wrong direction.In all there be certain merits and demerits i will be writing in this issue which supports by giving two or the major reasons and also will present a contrary point which is against use of more technology.
First the major advantage of the technology is that it has came closer to people and helped people solving their problems easily and people may wish to believe technology truly .For example in today’s world there are number of who takes help of internet for solving the issues related to their projects relating to the employees and students may use more technology to solve their complex mathematical and philosophical problems and this in turn reduces human effort to work on their own and taking the help of the technology.Also there are number of experts available in the field which also reduces stress for the working people .
Second disadvantage of the technology solving problems for ,people might decrease the thinking level of every human.This in turn can lead to low level capacity of thinking ,and directly use of technology for solving their problems. This can lead to decrease in number of research levels going through any country ,as people are binded enough to the technology such that new innovations and the research project might get a decline in the following years.
For example ,take an IT sector student or students who rely for their projects on internet and directly submit the project found on the internet which reduces their capacity for solving hard algorithms regarding the data structures and many other applications of the computers.
In the third statement there will be downfall of people getting interacted with the new companies and the new projects.As the people initially dependent on the technology for solving it, now faces a harsh condition where they are given a new project on a topic and they are not able to
find the solving methods or the algorithms related to that project on the internet and that may deteriorate their thinking capacity.Also on the religious and the social level technology place a new role. If people face some religious circumstances they follow the tradition according to some gurus or their spiritual peers and that may lead to follow the wrong path and .In some cases finding solution from technology lead to waste of time and money.
On the contrary point technology may help in settling problems and the differences created in the environment.For example an extraording student might not be able to solve the complex math problem which may use technology to solve that problem and might also learn some tricks and techniques to solve problems .As technology was invented only for the fruitful purposes of the humans.Also for the case of scientists going through a research might need some help for the ongoing research which may lead their successful research. Also number of people going through depression and come closer in the social media environment where they are able to settle differences.
On the sum i would like to favor the point that technology will deteriorate thinking capacity of the humans but some points may also favor the technology regarding helping solving the problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, regarding, second, so, third, for example, in some cases, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 14.8657303371 209% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 58.6224719101 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3002.0 2235.4752809 134% => OK
No of words: 589.0 442.535393258 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09677419355 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.92639038232 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71925687332 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.404074702886 0.4932671777 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 922.5 704.065955056 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 23.0359550562 230% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 165.735276324 60.3974514979 274% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 272.909090909 118.986275619 229% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.5454545455 23.4991977007 228% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 5.21951772744 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 35.0 7.80617977528 448% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417947701452 0.243740707755 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.213707758723 0.0831039109588 257% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.229422536043 0.0758088955206 303% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201433440559 0.150359130593 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119461941764 0.0667264976115 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.4 14.1392134831 208% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.68 48.8420337079 36% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 12.1743820225 197% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.19 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 11.8971910112 252% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 11.2143820225 207% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.7820224719 255% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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