in many countries, schools have severe problems with student behaviour. what do you think are the causes of this? what solutions can you suggest ?
The lifestyle of students has undergone dramatic changes on account of modernity. presently, reckless behaviour of students towards their teachers, classmates and teachers has become a gigantic concern undeniably. several factors arouse this phenomenon. Here, I would like to throw light on causes and remedies to address this worrying concern.
There are multifarious causes behind it. First and foremost, lack of etiquettes is an enormous responsible factors to swing this curse. For example, parents are subjected to be bread winners to manage astronomical outlays in this era of inflation. Ther...
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Yes, it is a smart way. No problem to put a little bit more content for examples.
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Score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 296 350
No. of Characters: 1658 1500
No. of Different Words: 206 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.148 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.601 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.817 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 138 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 115 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 83 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 49 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.143 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.006 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.643 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.286 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.56 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.08 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Tnxxx, R the ideas used in my
Tnxxx, R the ideas used in my above esaay good ?????? n do tell wht cud be improved more to get 8.5 ????
Ideas are great too. No
Ideas are great too.
No great difference between 8.0 and 8.5 in testbig as we told before.
in this above essay , I have used a smart way as u told me , I explained first idea with example than I wrote example in the form of simple sentence then again I wrote next idea with example .. so that examiner can not figure out .. tell me how do you find this strategies..????? plzzz chwleck my essay sir