Enthusiastic people will choose to work hard can choose the option of business. Home option is for lazy people. House is considered as fixed asset and business is movable asset. If I have enough money then I will go for business.Basically there are two types of assets. Fixed and movable asset. Fixed assets are the assets in which money is invested only and there are no chances of income generation. Whereas movable asset leads to income generation.
Investing money in business will give profit and this profit can be used for buying house and other assets. Money investment in home will some income by renting home and selling but the chances and profit from home are less than business. While running business we need good principle if we tend to buy home first we will not do business. If we look in to life of successful examples of enterpreneurs we see that they had focused themselves in business first. Sanjay Ghodawat an industrialist from Maharashtra, India started his Star industry business first then after settling in it he built a big home.
Common man always wish for a home, a job and a good life. So he invest all his income of his life in building home for him. he will never consider that if I start a business from this money then I can get many houses like this. The prices of home are going on seventh cloud. We can get money by selling home but the price of resell home are lesser than original price of home.
Increased business will increase profit and increased profit will increase the chances of better life having not just single home but many houses. Increasing numbers of businessmen will help to build a better community and nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 230, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Basically
...nough money then I will go for business.Basically there are two types of assets. Fixed an...
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Line 1, column 403, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...re are no chances of income generation. Whereas movable asset leads to income generatio...
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Line 2, column 339, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...buy home first we will not do business. If we look in to life of successful exampl...
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Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'invests'.
Suggestion: invests
...or a home, a job and a good life. So he invest all his income of his life in building ...
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Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...e of his life in building home for him. he will never consider that if I start a b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, then, thus, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 295.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66440677966 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50939057943 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51186440678 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9559279309 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.4210526316 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5263157895 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.73684210526 5.45110844103 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0993220461292 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0354336764523 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445804396706 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0604814689229 0.150856017488 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400666782602 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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