Main purpose of Television (TV) and movies was entertainment. Before 100 yrs there was different means of entertainments like Plays, Drama, Music festivals etc Before approximately 100 yrs Dadasaheb Falake pioneered Indian cinema through movie "Harishchandrachi Factory". From that cinema industry growing day by day. Televisions are media to reach people. The advanced technology developed TV. Its journey was from CRT to LCD and LED.
The movies show large impact on its viewers. Watching TV is an addiction in some cases. Watching TV by switching lights of will harm our eyesight and can cause insomania. In 1900 the movie named "Ek duje ke liye" (Made for each other) was launched. The storyline was a couple commits suicide after doing many unsuccessful attempts of living together. After this movie many cases of couple suicide came forward saying that we can't live together better we die. This shows that movies have impact on the community. The famous dialogues like "Hii.. I m bond.. James Bond" are copied by peopleand until now they keep saying this. Its been long time after Bond Movie release but people will never forget such dialogues. Some copy hairstyles, looks, dialogues even they do anything to look like movie characters. They start to think behave like them forgetting their true self.
Movies like "Padman", Starring Akashay Kuman, an Indian action hero gave awareness about sanitary pads and the problems faced by women during menstruation. He acted on many movies that spread awareness in many aspects like army, toilet, history any many more making him my favorite sensational hero.
Now a days TV is found everywhere in offices, homes and school colleges. It is the main carrier of movies to people. After few days of movie release we can watch it on TV. Some channels on TV are specially dedicated to movie shows. They stream movies 24/7.
TV is not only participating in streaming movies but also there are many programmes on animal, human history, music, news, sports and many reality shows. Its up to us what we choose to watch. I think some movies have small term impact after new movie people start run behind new movies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...successful attempts of living together. After this movie many cases of couple suicide...
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...ple suicide came forward saying that we cant live together better we die. This shows...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, i think, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11420612813 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80566804632 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632311977716 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.0550774028 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.3103448276 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3793103448 20.6045352989 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.62068965517 5.45110844103 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159683459076 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044086259095 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356351679744 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0908336017165 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193402061025 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 58.1214874552 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.47 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.