Eye correction surgery
According to speaker Laser eye surgery is more useful where as writer says that it is not. To prove speakers point of view, he used four main points as cost, side effects, healing time and effective time of surgery.
Firstly in the passage it was stated that surgery is costly but speaker thinks that this is a misconception. In recent years cost of surgery has reduced by 30%. Furthermore, he said that cost of equipment are decreasing and increased compitation among doctors performing surgery played important role in lowering prices of surgery.
Secondly writer stated that time required to recover from eye operation is high. it can be 2 weeks. speaker contradicts this by saying that healing time of surgery is only two to three days. after this speaker puts forth his doubt by implying that the time needed to repeat surgery is a lot. repetition is not needed within few months or years. there are some evidences that in one case surgery lasted for up to 20 yrs.
last but not least writer points out that there are chances of cornea displacement after surgery. Whereas, speaker said that there are only few cases and this happens ony in extreme environments. For example cornea displacement occurred to a hiker on top of Mount Everest where high altitude and increased pressure affected his eyes. this resulted in displacement of cornea.
Hence in conclusion, speaker disagrees with the writer in the line of reasoning cogently.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...peaker Laser eye surgery is more useful where as writer says that it is not. To prove sp...
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Line 5, column 125, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...this is a misconception. In recent years cost of surgery has reduced by 30%. Furt...
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Line 9, column 82, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... to recover from eye operation is high. it can be 2 weeks. speaker contradicts thi...
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Line 9, column 101, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Speaker
...e operation is high. it can be 2 weeks. speaker contradicts this by saying that healing...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...e of surgery is only two to three days. after this speaker puts forth his doubt by im...
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Line 9, column 192, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “after” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e of surgery is only two to three days. after this speaker puts forth his doubt by im...
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Line 9, column 293, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Repetition
...time needed to repeat surgery is a lot. repetition is not needed within few months or year...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
... not needed within few months or years. there are some evidences that in one case sur...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Last
...e surgery lasted for up to 20 yrs. last but not least writer points out that th...
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Line 13, column 10, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the least'.
Suggestion: not the least
... lasted for up to 20 yrs. last but not least writer points out that there are chance...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...d increased pressure affected his eyes. this resulted in displacement of cornea. ...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...esulted in displacement of cornea. Hence in conclusion, speaker disagrees with t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 1373.03311258 88% => OK
No of words: 243.0 270.72406181 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99588477366 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59028573311 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588477366255 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 419.366225166 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3883137147 49.2860985944 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.875 110.228320801 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1875 21.698381199 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06452816374 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 4.19205298013 286% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17220732882 0.272083759551 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586553773331 0.0996497079465 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066342160414 0.0662205650399 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890110666517 0.162205337803 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747300249786 0.0443174109184 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.3589403974 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.8541721854 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.0289183223 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.