Its true that gap between rich and poor is increasing day by day. Rich people have lots of money they invest money generated from one business to another. Which ultimately increases their income. Rich people knows very well to utilize and manage their money. Rich people higher peoples to work in organisation, to get more ideas from them. Hired people get well paid.
Where as poor people poor people barely manage to earn enough for their daily expences. They don't have money to work as interpreneur. Bank denies to give loan as they don't have any mortgage. So they never think to start any buisness. they find job and fail to try for anything new. As poor people keep completing daily needs and fail to save money for future. he spends all salary on needs. This things increases gap between rich and poor people.
To overcome this problem our government must come forward to solve this problem. Firstly rich people should pay more taxes than poor people. So that government can use this money for poor people. There are many children and people keeping wish to learn but financial crises avoid them doing it. Children start to work in early age. Job and business oriented education or courses should make free for them. Interest free loan should be provided to group of poor people to start a business.
There are many rich people who help poor people by providing scholarship and free education. Ratan Tata, an Indian industrialist worked lot for poor people. His trust gives gives opportunity to all poor people. There are some NGO's they give free career oriented courses for poor. Many educational institutes in India ask for donation one giving donation gets admission and middle class students having caliber fail to take admission. Government must keep strict eye on them.
We have to try from both rich and poor side so together we can have better community to live in otherwise day by day this gap will keep on increasing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...generated from one business to another. Which ultimately increases their income. Rich...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Whereas'?
Suggestion: Whereas
...from them. Hired people get well paid. Where as poor people poor people barely manage t...
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Line 2, column 10, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'poor people'.
Suggestion: poor people
.... Hired people get well paid. Where as poor people poor people barely manage to earn enough for their ...
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Line 2, column 93, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...n enough for their daily expences. They dont have money to work as interpreneur. Ban...
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Line 2, column 167, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...eneur. Bank denies to give loan as they dont have any mortgage. So they never think ...
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Line 2, column 234, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...they never think to start any buisness. they find job and fail to try for anything n...
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Line 2, column 360, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...eeds and fail to save money for future. he spends all salary on needs. This things...
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Line 2, column 391, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
... future. he spends all salary on needs. This things increases gap between rich and p...
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Line 2, column 403, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'increase'.
Suggestion: increase
...spends all salary on needs. This things increases gap between rich and poor people. To o...
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Line 4, column 167, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: gives
...t worked lot for poor people. His trust gives gives opportunity to all poor people. There a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80239520958 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27956608332 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538922155689 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.1344086022 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8949692034 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.2857142857 100.406767564 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.9285714286 20.6045352989 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.03571428571 5.45110844103 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348872463826 0.236089414692 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100778977765 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.096587369447 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207236791589 0.150856017488 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693215187558 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 11.7677419355 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 58.1214874552 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.67 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.0537634409 64% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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