Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Although I have to admit that telling the truth can display a person's sincere, I disagree with the statement. There are several reasons for this argument.
Firstly, to maintain a healthy relationship, we must consider other people's feelings and take care of them, which require more than often tactful words, or even expressions that are not always the same with facts. This is not deceit, in my opinion. Instead, it represents our attention and love towards friends as well as our kindness. For example, when one of my friends, who doesn't have many gifts for literature creation, wrote a poem and showed it to me expectantly, I concealed my genuine thoughts and praised her as a talented poet. My friend was both delightful and thankful, and our friendship became more robust. If I told the truth in that situation, it would just hurt my friend's feelings and damage this relationship without offering me any benefits.
Secondly, lying to people out of good will can bring about more desirable results than merely describing the factual events sometimes. Consider the following circumstance - a teacher finds out that the intellectual level of one of his students is below average. Instead of telling the truth, he treats the student with excessive patience, and always encourages that child to keep on trying without giving up on himself. The student, who gain confidence and perseverance from the teacher's instructions, finally succeed and make great achievements. Stories of this kind can be discovered in both real life and many films. Another famous example is doctors who hide the actual physical conditions from the patients. Once, a patient was diagnosed with one kind of cancer, but her doctor, believing in the power of psychological self-suggestion, kept telling her the disease was barely some minor illness. Eventually, the patient made a miraculous recovery. By refusing to speak the truth, the teacher and the doctor helped others more.
To sum up, always telling the truth is absolutely not the essential component of a high-quality relationship, and we, in many situations, need to tell some white lies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
...dmit that telling the truth can display a persons sincere, I disagree with the statement....
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Line 3, column 379, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...or example, when one of my friends, who doesnt have many gifts for literature creation...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, kind of, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15317919075 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86399950578 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632947976879 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3948682814 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0555555556 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148768829576 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415985641227 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508158665056 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110245294953 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464806430246 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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