Task 2: Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
When it comes to hardships in life, opinions differ on whether it is better to accept or to seek remedies. Both views will be discussed further in this essay, however, in some cases, I believe it is more effective to long for solutions instead of being curtailed by the perceptions of risks and failures.
Even the most successful people rarely achieve goals on their first try. Apparently, it is unrealistic to expect absolute success all time as life is full of obstacles. Besides, from a personal perspective, if you opt for unwanted working conditions or financial burden, it could be prone to adverse mental conditions because of excessive pressure and stress. Indeed, you can not expect different results if you decide on sitting back. Thus, tackling the problems at their source is necessary and may be chances to turn difficulties into victories.
However, many disagree and feel overwhelmed by the tension. they dispute that people should justify themselves and do not need to drain energy. first, difficulties in life like financial problems can be adjusted if people send wisely and serve for what they need only. Also, people who live in the poor area, without education, it might be impossible to improve their status and have well paid jobs, regardless of how they try, these people feel better off by focusing on what they have and their survival. Despite this, people should not abandon the opportunity to be off in corners in favor of temporary peace in mind.
In conclusion, while it is true that forgetting all unhappy moments makes life bit easier, I opine that the act of accepting any dilemmas is not a wise choice. this explains why people will regret on the second thought.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, first, however, if, may, second, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, in some cases, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95470383275 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62290894336 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634146341463 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5383231043 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.571428571 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0836368927422 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0265979147358 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0236345454097 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0502014737108 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253503640977 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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