Any invention that you think proved beneficial or detrimental to society?
One of the most conspicuous trend’s world is a colossal upsurge in nowadays the recent researches are booming day by day. Moreover in previous time these types of technology were not available on that time. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns is one’s life. However, I do not entirely accept this and why in this essay.
There are a number of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that when we are far away from our relative we can talk them with the help of mobile phones via video calling can not only contribute to we can use GPS to get our location properly and we can easily find our location but also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
There are however, some pitfalls that can easily overwhelm the potential benefits of some students use mobile phones more than studies. For examples, they use social sides to much and play games like PUBG. The primary one stems from the fact that by observing the aforementioned trend, people have not only realized its gravity, but also gauged the magnitude of its repercussions when it comes to today’s ever changing lifestyle.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite some drawbacks of mobile phones people should use it limitedly. Moreover students should focus on their studies are indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...rend's world is a colossal upsurge in nowadays the recent researches are booming day b...
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Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...cent researches are booming day by day. Moreover in previous time these types of technol...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...es. For examples, they use social sides to much and play games like PUBG. The prim...
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Line 4, column 136, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
... phones people should use it limitedly. Moreover students should focus on their studies ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 301.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84053156146 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61737096869 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568106312292 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.1314776123 50.4703680194 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.076923077 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76923076923 7.25397266985 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.242375264174 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0925447433944 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.071462118173 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151781067708 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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