In the past 100 years, there have been many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes, and computers. What do you think is the most important invention of them? Why?
It is evident how advanced inventions and technologies change the lives of people in the last 100 years. Thinking about them, there is no doubt that the computer is the greatest creation of them all. This essay will explain some of the reasons to see how great the computer is.
To begin with, there is a myriad of reasons why the computer is the most important invention of mankind in recent years. However, the most evident one is derived from the fact that the computer can helps people calculate at an amazing speed without making mistakes. With its ability to store and manipulate information, as long as you can give the computer a proper set of logic, it can speed up all types of calculations at ease. For example, a medical researcher can finish his complicated simulation model for the new antibiotic in just days instead of years of trials-and-error experiments. Or an engineer can find the optimal design for the new aeroplane by utilising the calculation power of the computers.
Not only used for research but computer technologies can also be used in almost all other aspects of modern life such as entertainment, education and all kinds of jobs. For example, you can use computers to play video games, watch movies, listen to music for entertainment. For jobs, you can simply use Word to quickly prepare documents or PowerPoint for presentations. In an extreme case, Amazon relies on computers to automate all types of planning which normally can only be done by the human.
In conclusion, the computer is the most important invention of men because it helps reduce the time needed for your activities, as well as supports people in almost all other aspects of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88194444444 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80500544662 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579861111111 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4345603005 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.153846154 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.25397266985 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18620066323 0.242375264174 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734680281012 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616737572907 0.071462118173 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122685146905 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390707939738 0.0609392437508 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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