People and governments have different views about the politic targets of countries. Many governments believe that economic progress plays a key role in future of country, while there has been a remarkable increase in the number of people who believe that other types of progress have same level importance for a country. In this essay, I will examine the these views before drawing a reasonable conclusion.
Admittedly, economy is a vital part of the country. A strong economy provides better education and work opportunities and it improves the life quality. For instance, Germany have a powerful economy and their inflation rate is lowest level around the World. Citizens of Germany can easily access a lot of public services which are here thanks to their economy. Furthermore, economic progress is more important than other types of progress because other progress rely on the economy. For example; according to a survey which was published by the Guardian which a daily newspaper in France. French people who work in a good salary job think that if they have not enough money they cannot focus on their job. Thus, governments should work for increase value of local currency and then make new regulations on other progress.
On the other hand, in spite of the fact that enormous importance of economy variety politics are necessary for a country. The governments should not ignore other types of progress. Even, they have to invest on variety of progress such as art, drama, sport or science because these are neither unimportant nor unnecessary for citizens. People improve their productivity and creativity through these activities. Therefore, these areas important as same as economy.
To sum up, economy is as fundamental to countries as the cell to biology or the atom to chemistry. Nevertheless, other types of progress are necessary for all countries around the World.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, such as, in spite of, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20261437908 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74054243839 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539215686275 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0595773102 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4444444444 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351272202497 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102182329721 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115929343693 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211792009781 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507038215748 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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