Some people that there should be fixed punishment for eachtype of crime. Others, However, argues that circumstances of individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on punishment.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that for all crime, penality should be same for all. While other believes that situation and intention should be considered. I personally believe that all crime is different from other and should be treated as same way as the nature of crime.
On the one hand, punishing the same, for all type of crime, will rapidly decrease the process time of judgment. While it will helpful to be handled the cases, expediate the announcing of the conviction without deciding the nature of crime and duration of punishment. According to the pakitsnai newspaper, around 16 thousand cases are in queu of waiting because courts do not have enough time to solve all the cases on the table because various type of it. However I do not agree on that because consideration of motivation and situation will define the exact purpose of crime and safe from wrong decision.
On the other hand, to make the judgment fair, it should be considered all the aspect of criminal activity. Condition of the person leads to harmful act according to situation intention. Environment also play vital role to pursuade the person to commite the crime. A study found that people of low income background are engaged in crime because there are less opportunity and sources of income available of people, which make them to involve in crime.
In conclusion, in my opinion, courts and judges should focus on the nature, situation intention of crime, than penalize the person, instead of giving same kind of judgment to all crime only sake for safing the process time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87452471483 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54585950662 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528517110266 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1744180058 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.833333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286184661897 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117367907223 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795783182108 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183139643278 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693614575078 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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