It is often said that government spend too much money on projects to protect wildlife, while there are other problems that are more important ?
Do you agree or disagree?
It is an undeniable truth that, nowadays national authorities are contributing huge amount of money towards saving an animals. In my opinion, i think that government should spend money to solve the issue of education and health care problems rather than wild life protection.
To commence with, there are other sectors are available, where regime can aid people by money. first and foremost an education department. Today's time, there are still plethora villages or towns do not have infrastructure like school and colleges for the children, because of this illiteracy rate is rapidly increasing. If a government constructed school facilities therefore every students acquire knowledge, after that in future they will find a good job and secure a healthy lifestyle as well as people pay the taxes to rise an economic of country.
Secondly, the government ought to investing money to health care field. To illustrate this, people are suffering from detrimental disease such as lungs cancer, asthma and heart problems, for treatment of these diseases required a lot of money and especially destitute family cannot afford that much money. So that government should starts new policy in which, they can give financial support to poor family for treatment purpose. In addition to that, the health authorities construct new hospitals and clinic where people can treatment their disease in free of cost.
In conclusion, in my views; Government should provide funding to wildlife, but they first give priority to an education sector and health care department in the country.
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| 2019-07-27 | Ajay Naykar | 56 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an animal' or simply 'animals'?
Suggestion: an animal; animals
...ing huge amount of money towards saving an animals. In my opinion, i think that government...
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Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...wards saving an animals. In my opinion, i think that government should spend mone...
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Line 2, column 95, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
..., where regime can aid people by money. first and foremost an education department. T...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32530120482 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7570683313 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63453815261 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3697590739 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.545454545 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6363636364 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1818181818 7.06120827912 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124418062956 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471558511162 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368382059467 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0743233816216 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195831023565 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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