Some people feel that it is necessary to test new medicines on animals,while other people feel that it is not fair on animals and not necessary.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people feel that it is necessary to test new medicines on animals,while other people feel that it is not fair on animals and not necessary.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people considered that it requires to testing new medicines on animals, while other people believe that it is not essential step to do on animals and it is not fair. I will discuss about both views and give my opinion.
These days many companies provided some new medicines which initiated on animals. However, it requires for some experimental basis and which required for some pharmaceutical medicines.The medicines have required some experimental purposes which is first to test on animals. Meanwhile, it has necessary of some experimental basis because of it will not affect upon the humans and this is the reason behind that experiment.
On the other side, there are some factors which has affected upon the animals.there are some animals which are present in very rare species. while, It is to test on that animals because of lead to extinct some breed of animals. Hence, They disappeared from the world.while, the experiment on animals which might lead to extinct particular species of animals.
In my conclusion, I reiterate my views that there are some factors which are badly affected upon the animals because of to test on animals which would be lead to extinct particular species. However, There are some necessary test which has performed upon the animals otherwise it is worse effect upon the humans.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 184, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...uired for some pharmaceutical medicines.The medicines have required some experiment...
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Line 2, column 352, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...perimental basis because of it will not affect upon the humans and this is the reason behin...
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Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...which are present in very rare species. while, It is to test on that animals because ...
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Line 4, column 224, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'tests'?
Suggestion: tests
...cies. However, There are some necessary test which has performed upon the animals ot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1105.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06880733945 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74666473339 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 176.041082164 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.449541284404 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3712744915 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308546073809 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147961488376 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920251516499 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231450578119 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149238766573 0.056905535591 262% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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