Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
it is inevitable that the invention of computers is one of the greatest humankind’s invention. Nevertheless, there are some opinions claim that computers have made life more complicated and stressful. I, on the other hand, strongly oppose this opinion and I believe that computers have indeed brought many benefits to our daily life for three main reasons.
First of all, a huge amount of data and information is safely stored in a computer. this will reduce the time people looking up the information or making different kinds of operations significantly. just imagine life without computers. papers would become the main things to store knowledge. A large forest area would be destroyed just to make papers. And this would lead to manifold critical global issues such as climate change, habitat and biodiversity loss, etc.
Second of all, there is no doubt that a lot of works are better done by computers.they can perform many complex operations quickly, simultaneously and accurately; which are practically impossible solved by human. Diseases are diagnosed faster and more thoroughly by using computer in modern medicine. Polluted or radiation environments are very dangerous for people so when they need to work in these environments, people use computers to control active robots in place of humans.
Finally, communicating with other people for a long distance is no longer impossible with the born of computers. computers provide us a great means of communication – the Internet. it is the easiest and cheapest way to get in touch with relatives, friends, etc. A person can get the latest news, become friends with people from another countries, asks for comments of English speaking records, etc.
In conclusion, I totally concur that computers have made life easier and more convenient. they bring us manifold benefits in life such as communicating, calculating, solving problems and storing data.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, look, nevertheless, second, so, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35526315789 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00576546636 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.8298384509 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4444444444 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297883885042 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902172420633 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122645123941 0.0667982634062 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166447333203 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111325455441 0.056905535591 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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