An increasing number of people are changing their careers.
What are the reasons? Do you think this is a positive or negative development to society?"
While the majority of people are often satisfied with what they are doing for a living, there is a rising trend of others changing their careers at some points in their lives due to several reasons. In my view, this kind of development should be looked at in a positive light owing to its potential contribution to decrease the unemployment rate.
First of all, it is worth starting from the outset by examining the rationale behind this increasing trend. It is quite obvious that when it comes to personal preferences, people tend to change over time. The same logic also goes to career choices meaning people can change their jobs at any time irrespective of whether external factors play a role in their decisions. In most cases, people will probably think of a career change once they have experienced and learned all the necessary skills they need to know in the job. However, dissatisfaction with the working environment may also be another reason making people quit their original occupations.
Such drastic decision poses fear and uncertainties to many people as they may suffer from a long jobless period. However, on the bright side of thing, this trend may result in many job vacancies within a particular sector giving great chances to graduates or anyone who wants to set foot into the industry. Thus, it may help reduce youth unemployment and improve a country’s economy generally. Moreover, a recent study has shown that those who switch their professions may lead a more fulfilled and happier life after finding another career path that truly suits them.
In conclusion, I would like to reaffirm my position that this trend of development is indeed a positive one. It is expected that with many people changing careers for their own good, the mental well-being of the society will be significantly improved
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| 2019-07-29 | Nguyễn Thị Ngọc Dung | 84 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, kind of, first of all, in most cases, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00326797386 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70837757138 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637254901961 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5844306045 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.769230769 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247361217923 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801190146273 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471471973428 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152486007611 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652588674453 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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