It is undoubted that whitening skin products are gaining popularity across the world and provide huge profits for the companies involved in their sale. In this essay, the reasons and effects of using productions which whiten and lighten skin should be illustrated as follows.
On the one hand, there are some reasons why people tend to use these products. Firstly, people these days are bombarded with appealing and exaggerating advertisement which involves the appearance of well-known celebrities. As a result, people purchase these cosmetic products with the aim of improving their skin tone since they are believe in the celebrities on the. Furthermore, in the modern era, people do not like having a tanned skin; which are usually linked to their social. Specifically, because women would like to show-off their high standard, they don’t mind splurging money on buying these products.
On the other hand, skincare products lead to the effects on both society and individuals as follows. Firstly, this would put people’s health at risk because of unknown ingredients which contain in the products. According to recent research, creams made with the harmful chemicals damage the natural skin and people look older at a young age. Secondly, this might worsen the issue of skin-tone discrimination among people with dark skin. As a result, they tend to suffer from isolation, depression widen the gap between people.
To sum up, there are some reasons and effects of skincare products which are mentioned above. It is recommended that if people use the money in an appropriate way for these products, the effects on both society and individuals would be better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'believed'.
Suggestion: believed
...mproving their skin tone since they are believe in the celebrities on the. Furthermore,...
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Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: THE_SENT_END[1]
Message: Did you forget something after 'the'?
... they are believe in the celebrities on the. Furthermore, in the modern era, people ...
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Line 7, column 142, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an appropriate way" with adverb for "appropriate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ecommended that if people use the money in an appropriate way for these products, the effects on both...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28358208955 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75874235651 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567164179104 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.5627689721 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.142857143 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314651865232 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1089772762 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718489489033 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21279707055 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0857139155402 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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