Medical technology is responsible for an increase in human’s life expectancy. Is it a boon or a curse for the mankind?

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Medical technology is responsible for an increase in human’s life expectancy. Is it a boon or a curse for the mankind?

one of the most conspicuous trends today’s world is a colossal upsurge medical technology increase in population of old age people. there is a widespread worry that this will only lead to myriad of concerns in one’s life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.

there are number of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that medical technology can not only contribute to unemployment among young generation but also lead to a numerous other benefits in various field. Thanks to the wide range advantages it offers, not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead, as far arguments their changes of prosperity and excellence is concerned.

Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that only likely to helps are thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, only when one follows, such a system, can they broaden they horizons, thus learning such essential attributes as responsibility dedication as a perseverance. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of medical technology.

According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach a conclusion that the benefits of medical technology are indeed too great to ignore.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 230.0 242.827586207 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13913043478 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00308599941 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591304347826 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.243533787 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.454545455 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9090909091 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 7.25397266985 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101052739004 0.242375264174 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395694336728 0.0925447433944 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450767597327 0.071462118173 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0652258997238 0.151781067708 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366226898069 0.0609392437508 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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