Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents today are more involved in their children's education than were parents in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The author posits that the current parents are more contributes to their kids’ educational processes in the comparison of past parents. This is the claim with which I generally do concur. Among the countless reasons and clues which gives adherence to my standpoint, I will delve into the most conspicuous ones in what follows.
The first striking fact which should be bolded here is the few numbers of kids in each family makes it more convenient for parents to control their children. Indeed, the birth rate is declined during the past two decades and each family instead of the five kids used to have one or two kids. This decrement causes the parents to spend more times with their kids, meanwhile, in the past, the crowded family has the difficultly for controlling and spending time with their kids. A lucid instance which shed the spotlight on this fact is me and my mother's example. My mother rises in a crowded family with seven kids; as she said she and her siblings rarely spent time with their mother as she was busy with daily chores and responsibility related to her children. Consequently, they played and studied individually, with less interaction with their parents. On the other hand, in our small family, I and my sister have this opportunity to spend plenty of times with my parents, since my parents' duties in the home are fewer. Therefore, we completely are observed and controlled with our parents, and they directly or indirectly involved in our education too.
Another equally crucial point which should be considered is the enhancement of the educational level in the society, which emphasizes the importance of education. In fact, in modern society, the majority of parents possess at least a bachelor degree from the university, and development of science in the varies field urges the sophisticated exploration of science, and encourage individuals for obtaining the further education in the various field of science. This fact is also verified by two varied studies which are conducted in the Educational and Sociology Department of Tehran University. According to the noteworthy, intelligence research conducted in the Sociology Department, people's eager for education is increased approximately by fifty-five percent in the last two decades, and the vital reason for this increment is the scientific development which depicts the ambiguities and chasm status of science which requires further study. Furthermore, based on the survey done by Educational Department of Tehran University nearly seventy-six percent of current parents in Iran are graduated from universities and wishing their kids also enter the universities and continued their studies in the upper level. The combination of these two facts shows the increase in parents’ involvement in kids' studies.
However, some people claim that for the sake of hectic lifestyle in modern society, the parents spend fewer periods with their kids; thus, they also have less involvement in their kids' education. Although in modern society, everyone is in a hurry and has fewer times, the aim and concept of family are altered totally too. While in the past the families were closely interconnected with each other, and there were more family meeting between the friends, in modern society the nucleus family is in trends. Nowadays, families are isolated and define as parents and kids, as the number of people with which the parents had communication is decreased, the interaction among the family members is increased. Thus, parents own more time to spend with their kids and involve in their educational processes.
To wrap it up, all the aforementioned facts, explicitly illustrates the modern families more involve in their kids' education. As the controlling the fewer kids leads to allocate more time on each kid, and enhancement of educational background of parents, caused them to encourage their kids to further studies; the parents in modern life in more contributes in their kids’ studies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, at least, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 100.0 52.1666666667 192% => OK
Nominalization: 30.0 8.0752688172 372% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3368.0 1977.66487455 170% => OK
No of words: 643.0 407.700716846 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23794712286 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.03561760524 4.48103885553 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84887806314 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 294.0 212.727598566 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457231726283 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1052.1 618.680645161 170% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 11.0 3.08781362007 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.6011329529 48.9658058833 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.333333333 100.406767564 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7916666667 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24633594663 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837000686096 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580080587519 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154525315536 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372779123295 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 11.7677419355 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 164.0 86.8835125448 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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