Nowadays, the important of accommodation which frequently generated a great deal of heated debate has even more controversial. While some people maintain the opinion of living in an apartment, in my opinion, there are more advantages of living in a house in compare with living in a flat.
At the outset, there are a myriad of reason why residences want to live in a house. First, by living in a house, people may easy get access to the traffic, therefore it’s more comfortable for someone who regularly go out. In contract, residences in high-rise buildings need more time for vertical circulation.
Moreover, whereas it seems to be more security to live in a building, I guess that the more security it is, the more troubles it brings to residences. The fact of the matter comes from the fact that the new projects developed in recent year are often equipped with high-security equipment. As the result, it is obligatory for residences to follow the regulation strictly. For example residences must always bring magnetic cards in order to enter the main gate or using elevator and in case they forget their card, it will be hard to access to their flat. This mater is surely not occurs to someone who live in their own house.
In conclusion, taking these points into consideration, I am inclined to believe that many people still want to live in their own house. However, the urbanization in many metropolitans makes the land fee raised significantly, so living in an high-rise building became the choice of many people.
- Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Other, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 78
- You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course.Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter1- Describe the situation2- Explain why you cannot continue at this time3- Say what action 73
- Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History.Discuss both the views and give your opinion. 56
- Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.Why do you think this is happening?What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? 61
- As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individuals well-being.What are the factors that contribute to job satisfaction?How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 28, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
... in a flat. At the outset, there are a myriad of reason why residences want to live i...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 238, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... fee raised significantly, so living in an high-rise building became the choice of...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, whereas, while, for example, i guess, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91923076923 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87046529432 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592307692308 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1175605012 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.583333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399099146249 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137011373489 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158055963606 0.0667982634062 237% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252107530745 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139623277455 0.056905535591 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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