8-)“Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.”
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
In our modern capitalist world, economic development has taken place at the top of list of the most important rules that nations should follow. Government are responsible bodies to maintain this development. They have some authority to make a law that support this economic progress. However, when they just focus on the economic development, some important concepts like the importance of some wilderness areas in the country may be out of the mind. However not every areas are valuable so that keeping in them their natural state be beneficial for the country.
To start with, for a nation having a good and clean environment has immense importance as well as the economic performance. People’s wealth cannot be measured by just the total amount of dollar that they put their pockets. They gain also some utility from fresh waters ,clean environment and untouched wilderness areas. If government pass a law regarding the preserving these important concepts ,all people live in this society may be better of. When we ask these people are you happy with your life, the answer for this question is high likely to be yes if some really important areas remain untouched by the law.
However, life is full of some trade offs. It is true that some wilderness areas are so important for the society’s wealth but there are also some areas which are relatively poor that if government make an effective plan, these areas could be developed for economic gain. In that regard, of course the optimal solution is using these areas for the economical progress because people value money as well.
To conclude, we cannot separate the importance of economical progress and the importance of having some wilderness areas on the wealth of nations. Government should take a step by thinking both of them. Clean environment without money and money without fresh atmosphere cannot satisfy the people of a society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: is
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Suggestion: However,
... in the country may be out of the mind. However not every areas are valuable so that ke...
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...y. To start with, for a nation having a good and clean environment has immens...
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...rt with, for a nation having a good and clean environment has immense importanc...
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...l solution is using these areas for the economical progress because people value money as ...
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Suggestion: economic
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, really, regarding, so, well, as for, of course, as well as, it is true, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 315.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07936507937 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67297816962 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530158730159 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.0332329316 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6875 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 5.21951772744 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311942546951 0.243740707755 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968325720195 0.0831039109588 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856243545874 0.0758088955206 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196377079588 0.150359130593 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869097438819 0.0667264976115 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 100.480337079 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.