Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet. Others however believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
One of the highly controversial issues these days relates to whether people should individually take care of their lifestyle or if it should be a government's responsibility to ensure healthier diets for their citizens. In my opinion, both parties should make it their own responsibility and turn into practice every knowledge about healthy and sustainable lifestyle.
On one side of the argument, there are those who believe that leading a healthy lifestyle is only an individual's responsibility. Everyone is entitled to live the way they want to, and so it is their choice to eat in a way that benefits them and not one that damages them. Moreover, choosing to be more active every day, buying organic produce for the household or not eating fast foods anymore are all choices that a person can make only when they willingly decide to do so. If one is not willing to make the efforts necessary to take care of his/her own health, other people cannot decide in their place. Disposition to lead healthier lifestyles only comes from within.
On the other hand, governments are deeply involved in the health issues of their citizens. One good illustration of their involvement is the taxes, which we pay on food such as fresh produce, meat, and fish, that are constantly rising instead of decreasing. Unless organic and locally sourced products are taxed less by the administration, people will always find it difficult to not rely on cheaper unhealthy foods. It is the governments' responsibility to make available more healthy choices, create campaigns that highlight the importance of healthy lifestyles and financially support their citizens who live in poverty.
After having discussed the most pertinent points of this issue, I feel that the only logical conclusion is that the advantages of having the governments involved in their people's health outweigh the possible disadvantages. Individuals need to be supported in their choices regarding their lifestyles by the public administration, for no other institution could do it better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 147, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...of their lifestyle or if it should be a governments responsibility to ensure healthier diet...
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Line 2, column 102, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... leading a healthy lifestyle is only an individuals responsibility. Everyone is entitled to...
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Line 3, column 427, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...y on cheaper unhealthy foods. It is the governments responsibility to make available more h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, regarding, so, i feel, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19393939394 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98303128809 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563636363636 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.9105123902 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.846153846 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3846153846 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372774302187 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123794700104 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910219168483 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227135966403 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0819394259055 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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