Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
climate throughout the world is producing so many serious problems, which are perilous for the environment. it is argued among the masses , climate should have change through the developed countries instead of developing nations. I am a strong advocate about that this should mitigate by all the nations, though developed or developing countries, and the reasons of it will be covered in this essay.
The fundamental reason for this is that pollutions are spreading in all the nations which are harmful for us . it is the main responsibility of developed nations to combat the pollutions because they are creating more and more pollution due to the more and more cutting of tree and use a lots of natural resources such as fossil fuel in their vehicles and produce the pollution . For example, in the Canada most of the people use their personal vehicles and create the pollution which is destroying the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 763.0 1615.20841683 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 152.0 315.596192385 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01973684211 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80866801616 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 176.041082164 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592105263158 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 506.74238477 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.0101677277 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.166666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214092678936 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106728074504 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0998239474546 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17227836241 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100000788056 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.