In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
There is a restriction about the time that American youngsters are permitted to go out. I believe that this regulation benefits the children in major aspects as I will explain as follow.
Firstly, not going out too late at night can help youngster having a good heath. the reason is when youngsters stay at home, they will go to sleep early and they will not feel sleepy the next day. In contrast, if teenagers go out late at night. They can not focus on anything they do the next day and may have some health problems such as heart disease and mental illness. Moreover, drinking a lot which is very popular at any night party among youngsters can easily weaken their immune system causing headaches.
Secondly, not going out too late at night can also help adolescents having the good academic performance at school. The first reason is teenagers can spend time on doing their homework and preparing lessons for the next day. In comparison, if teenagers go out too late at night they will not have time for their self-studying. Therefore, their school performance can be reduced noticeably over time. Furthermore, it is easily for students to focus on the lectures at school if they have enough sleep as the brain only works efficiently when it has appropriate rest. Moreover, adolescents' parents were worried about them.
In conclusion, I completely agree that adolescents should be prevented from going out late at night. the reasons are because it may affect their health, their academic performance at school and it can cause dangers for them as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'as follows'?
Suggestion: as follows
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Suggestion: The
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Suggestion: The
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87218045113 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6224654223 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53007518797 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6937561512 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206154266199 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868987832935 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585274940241 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128483618515 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518697761061 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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