Tying to save endangered animals is a waste of valuable resources.
Nowadays, protect the endangered animals are very risk and worthless for society. Some people are thinks that save the spices animals are very danger for all and others believe that it’s useful for humans and nature. I am totally disagreed with this statement and I would argue my opinion with valuable reasons.
On the one hand, to save the endangered animals are important for humans as well as nature. Since, we should appreciate the important of endangered animals are maintaining the balance of nature. The disappearance of animals may cause negative impact on other animals by breaking the food chain. For example, the crops may be definitely destroyed because of frog. Though, the insect feed on crops would never find their natural enemy. Clearly, we humans are responsible for making them endangered.
On the other hand, it is clear that animals are affected because of the ambiguous ecosystems which includes are unclean water, poisonous air and less rain-forests. For instance, the wildlife programs recording like how animals are killed illegally by humans.
However, in the long-term, people will benefit from the diversity of species which make the world wonderful. Therefore, losing one kind of animal may result in great loss to both human and nature.
To conclude reaffirm my opinion that it is valuable to keep endangered animals. Only when convergent efforts from all sectors are ensured, can we expect to see the much progress to protect the endangered animal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 236, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
...ful for humans and nature. I am totally disagree with this statement and I would argue m...
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Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...important for humans as well as nature. Since, we should appreciate the important of ...
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Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e definitely destroyed because of frog. Though, the insect feed on crops would never f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, kind of, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24166666667 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6023493659 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5875 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0152220465 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.8666666667 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232935165873 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080104989696 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653202018663 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124738814451 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560989451612 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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