SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT SUCCESS IS ABOUT HARD WORK AND DETERMINATION. OTHERS THINKS THAT SUCCESS HAS A CONNECTION WITH MONEY AND PERSONAL APPERANCE. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS, GIVE YOUR OPINION AND SOME OF YOUR OWN EXPERIENCE
A group of people advocate that tremendous resolution and hard work plays an important role in the success of an individual, while others attribute desirable achievements to the outstanding traits and strong financial backgrounds. In this essay, both views will be demonstrated and discussed thoroughly.
To begin with, exceptional appearance is regarded as the crucial factor of a person’s success. For example, Kim Kardashian, a prominent American model, possesses one of the most charismatic body at the moment. With this innate advantage, she has opted for fashion industry, signing a number of lucrative contracts with luxurious brands and acquiring a great deal of money eventually. Regarding people having good financial status, they can start their own business immediately after graduating and attracting investments. Since most of them are well-educated, their companies are believed to thrive in the long run.
On the other hand, putting countless effort on a persistent target may bring higher probability of success to everyone. Cristiano Ronaldo, for example, used to be underestimated by the junior coaches due to his physical limitations at the beginning of his career. Nevertheless, thanks to his incredible diligence at practicing sessions, Ronaldo has overcome all the shortcomings and become one of the greatest footballers in the world. Besides, Nick Vujicic, the man with no legs or arms, has endeavoured to do tasks like everyone else like swimming, surfing or playing football. Also, his sense of humour and inspirational presentations have encouraged lots of people not to surrender, however difficult the circumstances are.
Based on the aforementioned arguments, it can be concluded that being determined and assiduous is the key element to attain the accomplishments in the future. Wealth and appealing appearance may bring success quickly, but they are not as sustainable and invaluable as striving for goals relentlessly without giving up.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, so, well, while, for example, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25954325362 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3048992444 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.428571429 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154454015471 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456236530086 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416941259066 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862965795849 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389776540373 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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