SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT WOMEN SHOULD PLAY AN EQUAL ROLE AS MEN IN COUNTRY’S POLICE OR MILITARY FORCES. OTHERS THINK WOMEN ARE NOT SUITABLE FOR THESE KIND OF JOBS. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE OPINION?
With a view to enforcing the national security in the recent decades, a number of women have been encouraged to take part in country’s police or soldier forces. Nonetheless, some people undervalue the appearance of women in these groups on account of several reasons. In my opinion, women are nothing but undeniably crucial guardians of the country.
Some advocates of balance of genders may be under misapprehension that this policy will enhance the equality in the army. However, in practice, some exceptional male soldiers or police officers will not acquire admission merely since that army has run out of places. In other words, these potential human resources are being wasted. Furthermore, young female soldiers who have not been experienced in the army before may not control the appetites and have surreptitious relationship with other men, thereby reducing the fighting spirit and undermining the reputation of the national army.
It would be an exaggeration to claim that citizens should be rejected to enter military forces or police offices owing to the fact that they are women. When a group of women who have tremendous determination and special constitution that can overcome any difficulties are officially permitted, there will be significant augmentation for these forces, thus elevating the strength of national defense. Besides, thanks to the enormous willingness to devote to the country development, women are not only promoted to take part in the national forces, but also other male-biased occupations such as construction or mechanic workers. This may result in the disappearance of male chauvinism and prejudices about women in the long run.
In conclusion, despite the discrimination and underestimation, women’s involvement in the national defense would be a highly appreciated effort and contribution. Nevertheless, women should be fully aware of the potential difficulties and the unexpected temptation when engaging in these jobs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, thus, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56953642384 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20664549423 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58940397351 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5998364196 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.384615385 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8461538462 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287978154489 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983825208775 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443657169169 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174495842752 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647675472531 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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