do you agree or disagree the young kids are impolite or unkind than yey were fifty years ago?
Since the beginning of this century, education has declined drastically, which influences young people's behaviors. some peole believe that adults have become impolite and unkind than they were fifty years ago; however, there is a substantial body of evidence that casts doubts in this belif. From a personal perspective, I concur with the former point of view, given that there are lots of things that affect their adults 'behaviors, such as, technological invention and education. Below I will strive my supporting points in more details.
The first and foremost point, public education has reduced recently. A vivid example can be given to shed light onw what was elaborated above is in Canda schools started to lean kids from kindergarten about sex and homosexual. That had a bad effect on kids, given that they are immature to know such sort of information. As a result , parents started to involve in choosing their childern's subject; in order to make sure that they receive a quality education.
Next, coupled with inproper education, the technological invention is a second reason why teenagers are impolite today. Although the internet is a great invention, adults may use it for bad purposes. A recent survey conducted by the University of Toronto found that almost all adults who access webs have accounts on different websites, either on Facebook, Instagram, or Twitter; moreover, they could follow celebrities on their websites. some of these young people were influenced with the negative site of entertainers' life, such as taking drugs or crazy driving. In addition to that, they spend too much time on their cell phones or laptops which could cause some disorders. Therefore, young people today have bad behaviors.
Although the previous reasons are the most reasons that cross mind at a glance, they are not the only reasons available. Thre is another subtle point should be born in mind. The cellphone is another technological invention, students may use them in undesire purposes, such as taking improper pictures or cheating in exams.
Taking everything into consideration; without a doubt, kids today are less polite than they were fifty years ago. It is suggested that schools design learning activities improve their behaviors
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1892.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24099722992 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71769297983 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626038781163 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4679978378 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5789473684 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26315789474 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14146602709 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390711719671 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766233006136 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857587998191 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786901276937 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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