Some people use the Internet to search for solutions to their medical problems. Is it a positive or negative development? Give your own opinion and examples from your experience.
The Internet has become an inevitable part of human's life in various forms, which has made people to find out the solution of their problems swiftly. However, some opine that the internet is the best place to now get medical solutions. Thus, I am going deliberate my views over this statement.
To begin with, people have now become smarter and multitasking with the advent of technology, especially in the form of internet, therefore internet can be seemed as a medium for dealing with various medical complications on account of many positive reasons. Firstly, people often take a prescription of the doctors even for little illness, which in turn result huge problem for working people, as they usually have a ramification in managing their time, hence here internet can be a most pertinent alternative. On the top of that, internet can ensure quick appointment with doctors and thus doctors can treat their patients easily with resort to various platforms such as Skype and so on, consequently impediment of travelling for ill person is reduced significantly.
In contrast, internet is somewhat proved to be an effective, when it comes to cope with health related issues owing to myriad plethora reasons. Firstly, health contributes immensely in the growth of an individual, and thus little casualness can result fatal situation for an individual, even one can lose his/her life, correspondingly one should go for doctors, as most the information on internet are not reliable and authentic. In addition, it can be a barrier for those people, who are not tech savvy, which in turn again make it to be not a pragmatic solution. For instance, it has been found that due to bit ignorance, people often compromise with their health and later confront plethora predicaments.
In conclusion, I opine that health is the first priority of an individual and people can never compromise with it, therefore one should always approach doctor for better cure.
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| 2019-08-05 | kuldeep sharma | 100 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23948220065 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88538506054 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582524271845 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.0076901311 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.181818182 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0909090909 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.4545454545 7.06120827912 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157571876535 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665231917166 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386813062728 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998312004275 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368967412867 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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