News media are important in our modern society. Why are they so important? Are their influences generally positive or negative?
In recent decades, it is true that news media have gained in popularity also played a crucial role in our lives. Although there are still drawbacks to media news, I think its benefits are more remarkable.
One the one hand, the appearance of news media products could bring some disadvantages. First, there is a sharp increase in advertising programs on television as well as radio, which makes audiences feel annoyed. Those advertisements will occasionally appear in the form of pops up when you watching the video on YouTube, Facebook or the others. Second, some online magazines and journals contain adult contents that were uncensored before, leading to harmful effects to children under 18 years old. It will probably become the deep caused of a high crime rate in society as well.
On the other hand, I would argue that the downsides given above are eclipsed by a number of positive points. The news media help people get the latest news in a very short time which we couldn’t get in over the last few years. Possessing personal devices like mobile phone, you can get news daily through the media and this keeps them updated on the happenings around the world by some touch in your screen as long as your phone can connect to the internet. Furthermore, this can in turn increase sales of the product of many companies and brands. For example, according to a report taken by market researchers in the US, the amount of products sold from Coca-Cola Corporation is more than five times as this figure without advertising campaigns through media news.
In conclusion, I believe that the drawbacks in terms of the news media are outweighed by its benefits related to society and the economy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 138, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...its related to society and the economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, second, so, still, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8724137931 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62351254499 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624137931034 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.238748642 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.692307692 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125653006643 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428514531804 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382616658649 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0818026588463 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370934560189 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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