Twenty years ago, Dr. Field, a noted anthropologist, visited the island of Tertia. Using an observation-centered approach to studying Tertian culture, he concluded from his observations that children in Tertia were reared by an entire village rather than by their own biological parents. Recently another anthropologist, Dr. Karp, visited the group of islands that includes Tertia and used the interview-centered method to study child-rearing practices. In the interviews that Dr. Karp conducted with children living in this group of islands, the children spent much more time talking about their biological parents than about other adults in the village. Dr. Karp decided that Dr. Field's conclusion about Tertian village culture must be invalid. Some anthropologists recommend that to obtain accurate information on Tertian child-rearing practices, future research on the subject should be conducted via the interview-centered method.
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
While it may be true that Interview-centered method is superior to observation-centered method, Dr. Karp failed to make a reasonable argument. His evidence proposed were flawed, and the article consists of multiple unwarrant assumption. Thus, the article not strong enough to dispute Dr. Field work nor debasing observation-centered approach.
First and foremost, Dr. Garp assumes that the interviews' result of his graduant students were valid, but given no evidence to support this. The only information we know about the result of the interviews was that children living in the group of islands in Teria spend more time talking about their real parents. This sentence alone is full of logical flawed. The author didn't specify the sample size of the interviews. If the team had only asked 10 people, there is a high probability that the only children who were asked happened to talks more about their parents. In addition, the article does not describes how the interview was conducted. If the interviewer asked the children about their family, then the children would inevitably have to talk about their parents, regardless of the one who were taking care of them.
Even if the previous assumption were true, that the interviews was done correctly and it's validity is confirmed. Even so, just only because these children were spending more time discussing about their biological parents does not negate the fact that Dr.Field proposed about children getting reared by entire village. To assumes that the children were not reared by the village just because they talked more about their parents is logically flawed. It might just be the case that the chlidren like to talk about their parents. If the author had given more evidence regarding how the children were actually cared for by their parents, then it would have bolster the article claim.
Last but not least, Dr. Karp biggest flawed was the assumption that the interview centered approach to be more accurate in understanding cultures, even in other island. This assumption has no supporting evidence at all. It is incorrect to assumes that just because the interview-centered approach had worked in Tertia, it would work elsewhere. Granted that the interview-centered method is more accurate in Tertia, the observation-centered might still be more accurate in other islands. The contextual details of the island's culture might be the factor to determine which approach is more preferable. To say that observation-centered approach will be less accurate compared to interview-centered approach in other island cultures is not convincing.
In conclusion, there are many evidence needed before we can take Dr. Karp article seriously. We need to check the credibility of the interview results, the proof that children were actually spending more time with their parents, and that the interview-centered approach would work elsewhere. If these three questions were answers, the argument would argument would be more sound.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 474 350
No. of Characters: 2460 1500
No. of Different Words: 210 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.666 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.19 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.045 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 168 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 136 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 100 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 48 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.75 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.049 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.625 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.325 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.523 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.115 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...e is full of logical flawed. The author didnt specify the sample size of the intervie...
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Line 3, column 536, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'talk'.
Suggestion: talk
...nly children who were asked happened to talks more about their parents. In addition, ...
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Line 3, column 602, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'describe'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: describe
...ents. In addition, the article does not describes how the interview was conducted. If the...
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Line 3, column 602, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'describe'
Suggestion: describe
...ents. In addition, the article does not describes how the interview was conducted. If the...
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Line 3, column 824, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f the one who were taking care of them. Even if the previous assumption were tru...
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Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Field
...arents does not negate the fact that Dr.Field proposed about children getting reared ...
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Line 5, column 654, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'bolstered'.
Suggestion: bolstered
...or by their parents, then it would have bolster the article claim. Last but not lea...
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Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion that the interview centered approach to be more accurate in understanding cul...
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Line 9, column 26, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun evidence seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much evidence', 'a good deal of evidence'.
Suggestion: much evidence; a good deal of evidence
...convincing. In conclusion, there are many evidence needed before we can take Dr. Karp arti...
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Line 9, column 336, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'argument would'.
Suggestion: argument would
...these three questions were answers, the argument would argument would be more sound.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, may, regarding, so, still, then, thus, while, even so, in addition, in conclusion, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.6327345309 158% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 13.6137724551 125% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 28.8173652695 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 55.5748502994 92% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 16.3942115768 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2519.0 2260.96107784 111% => OK
No of words: 472.0 441.139720559 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33686440678 5.12650576532 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.56307096286 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10606154493 2.78398813304 112% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 204.123752495 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.451271186441 0.468620217663 96% => OK
syllable_count: 770.4 705.55239521 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.70958083832 221% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 19.7664670659 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.7949768809 57.8364921388 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.958333333 119.503703932 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 23.324526521 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 5.70786347227 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.25449101796 190% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.67664670659 235% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176541574557 0.218282227539 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578532998144 0.0743258471296 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474665683269 0.0701772020484 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112926967181 0.128457276422 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460992387032 0.0628817314937 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.3799401198 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.3550499002 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.5979740519 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.32208582834 97% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 98.500998004 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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