some people think money used for space explorations not worth it. They also believe that the can be channeled into other uses. to what extent do agree or disagree
Some individuals believe that funding the exploration of space is worthless and that it can be used for more important things. I completely agree as it does not directly impact lives and the resources can be used to make people's lives more comfortable.
To begin with, the first major reason why the money spent on space exploration does not worth it is that its impacts can not felt directly by the people. This is because it is only the elite that knows it importance and usefulness while the majority see the move as going too extreme since they are yet to explored the whole earth. For example, developing countries believe it is an elephant project and do not dare near it as their citizens will ask if it will bring food to their table or solve their enormous problems. As a result, more people are revolting against it.
Another reason is that the financial resources meant for it should be used to provide a more comfortable life for the people through creation of jobs. At present, unemployment rates are soaring high daily and people are looking up to the government to generate jobs for the people and spending more on abstract project . For example, 65% of Nigerian youths are unemployed and the government is making every effort to create jobs in order to make people live a worthy life. If government should embark on space exploration that will cost billions of dollars, there will be stiff opposition from them because what is paramount to them is job creation.
In conclusion, I completely agree that exploring the space amount to a waste of valuable resources which can be used for more germane thing as it does not have a direct positive effect on people's lives and does not solve their immediate needs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 319, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...le and spending more on abstract project . For example, 65% of Nigerian youths are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75747508306 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53581857804 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538205980066 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.5577011298 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.181818182 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3636363636 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308382274255 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122194326457 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066219060153 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19868986678 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480434172318 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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