Some people think that money is the best gift to give to youngster while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Although it is sometimes thought that the most appropriate present for the juvenile is fund, others believe otherwise. In my view, I consider that finance can be a source of poverty for them.
On the one hand, supporters of the first view say that the best reward for youngsters is fund because it can solve many challenges of life. This is because the majority of problems they faced in life can easily be overcome with cash. They have numerous things on their wanting list that only it can helps them achieve it, such as buying cars, clothes, electronic gadgets, paying of internet and phone bills, etc. Money helps them in planning for their future by setting up an enterprise. For example, my secondary school friend was given a huge sum of money by his father. At present, he owns 3 big companies with over 50 employees. Therefore, given money as a gift to a youngster can easily turn their lives around to become successful later in life, if well managed.
On the other hand, those with contrasting views opine that cash is not the best gift for children owing to the fact it can destroy their lives and I agree. This is because often times they wanted to buy many things, whether they are useful or not in order to show off among their peers that they are financially buoyant. Because they spend lavishly and could not manage the finances, they later become poverty-stricken. Therefore, the dollar is not the best reward for teenagers as it can ruin their lives when the lack the basic rudiments and capability to manage it.
In conclusion, while people have different opinions, I believe that financial resources is not the most appropriate award for giving a toddler because it can ruin their lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 300, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
... on their wanting list that only it can helps them achieve it, such as buying cars, c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7525083612 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50491178654 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585284280936 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2462139081 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117644588541 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042290661852 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429349430555 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.077273769887 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259037900962 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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