The graph shows the number of enquiries received by a tourist information office of a city over a 6 months period in 2011.
The given line graph illustrates the volumes of queries which were received by three means at a tourist information office in the first 6 months of the year 2011.
In January, people made over 400 enquiries in person, while nearly 800 letters were received seeking information about the office. Questions coming through the telephone were almost 800. But by the next one month, information sought by phone and in person were 800 and 600 respectively, whereas emails showed a slight but insignificant downward shift from where it had been earlier.
The curve representing face to face enquiries overtook that of mails, which remained immune to changes, and sat exactly on 800 in March. That of phone calls, on the other hand, shifted to the next line, 1000, and remained there.
Between March and April, a huge difference was noticed in the three kinds of queries received by the noted tourist office. In person and telephone enquiries rose steadily, seating above 1800 and on 1600 in June, the number of written queries fell until it maintained a level below 400.
Overall, enquiries made in person and those done by the telephone did not start very closely but increased significantly from the third month and nearly met each other, while the number of those received by mail went in opposite direction from the same time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ation sought by phone and in person were 800 and 600 respectively, whereas emails...
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Line 5, column 23, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... been earlier. The curve representing face to face enquiries overtook that of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, third, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1113.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99103139013 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50071477244 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600896860987 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5526665916 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.666666667 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7777777778 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267731921582 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928804816453 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848996470206 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135236164509 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869690783528 0.0819641961636 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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