New neighbours have recently moved in, but they are making a lot of noise at night while you are preparing for your exams.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter:
explain that they are preventing you from studying well
suggest what they can do to improve the situation
tell them when you will have completed your studies
Dear Mr and Mrs Tim,
I’m writing to you with displeasure due to the noise at night from your flat since the past 3 weeks since you moved in.
I have been finding it so difficult to study for my examination, which is coming up next week; It is getting me worried because I cannot meet up with my studies.
I’d like that you suspend all loud music while partying; you can rent the sound proof hall next to the supermarket across the street. Let me know how much it will possibly cost, I am willing to pay the rent until my exams are over. Just let me know ahead when you are likely going to have a loud night.
My exams will last for a month, from the 10th of August to the 10 th of September 2019.This is my final examination and I would not like to fail.
I look forward to a positive response change.
Best regards,
Lambert.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 88, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...f August to the 10 th of September 2019.This is my final examination and I would not...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 698.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33540372671 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25377701234 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.67701863354 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 198.9 290.88556701 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.6670769104 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.25 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166196931178 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607593005163 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708971673419 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0685580485535 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844167878251 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 85.02 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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