In many countries crime is increasing what are the main reason for this?
What can be to improve this situation
Crime is a cause of widespread concern today. Many nations of the world have witnessed an increasing number of criminal activities.
This problem stems from poverty. A lot of people cannot afford to put three square meals on their table and also find it difficult to fend for their families. This has led them into violating laws to earn a living for themselves. Of recent, I watched a news on the media about a young man who kidnapped his boss's wife and demanded a ransom of 5million before he was caught up by the police. In an interview with the man, he said he did this because he had four children and wanted to give them the best in life.
Also, the state of the nation's economy is a source of concern to many . This has left no alternative to people than to engage in some criminal acts - such as kidnapping, cyber crimes and stealing. For instance, Nigeria has been experiencing a down-turn in their economy , a lot of people are out of job. Because of it, the rate of crimes in Nigeria has increased.
Turning to possible solutions, probably the most effective measure is to create more jobs .This will help people feed their families and the rate at which people violate laws will be decreased. Ultimately, the government should make policies that can help to boost the economy.
In conclusion, unless efforts are made to shift the public consciousness from crime, by creating jobs for the teeming populace, this issue will only escalate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ting jobs for the teeming populace, this issue will only escalate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71764705882 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56382091684 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643137254902 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5423104466 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9285714286 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197178347028 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651215033743 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366508995152 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103636155403 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0139186348769 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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