It is different from one to another however, some people like living in cities others like to live in towns. There are many advantages and disadvantages for each of them, In my opinion I prefer to live in the town for many reasons.
Initially, living in country have a lot of advantage, however in the town we can rent a big luxury house withe a garden and swimming poll with a small mount of money compeer with the city. In the town moving from place to other is more essay cause lack of traffic and near distance between places, living in the town more healthy cause there is no environment pollution as the city and it's more quiet in night and in morning and I can enjoy the sound of birds each morning. In town I can make a numerous relation with the neighbors and enjoy the quietness cause only few people live in towns.
Moreover, in towns I can see a different kind of landscape and waterfall also, I can grow my own plants in my garden and have my own pets. furthermore, country have a less rate of crime compere with the city. In the country people stay keep the tradition values and that will save our identity and will help the next generation to know who they are and where they belong. Town is the best place to grow my family in have a headquarters home for the entire family.
In comparison, if I live in the city I will have many opportunities like, I will be close to the hospitals, restaurants and schools. Also, it will be a big chance to know different people from different places and culture. furthermore, it will be a big chances to start a local business with a small effort or find a job with a good potential income. In the city having car is not necessary as the town however, transportation are essay to move between places and you can use taxi, subway, bus or train. In the city there are many places to visit like parks, museum, historic places.
In my conclusion, I prefer living in country more than living in city for the reasons that I already mentioned in previous, I like to have privacy and luxury house withe a quit time and a beautiful landscape.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should give the same amount of money to their students’ sports activities as they give to university libraries. Use specific reasons and examples to give your opinion. 60
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- A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your locality Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community Do you support or oppose the factory establishment 66
- It has been said, "Not everything that is learned is contained in books." Compare and contrast the knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why? Use specific reasons and example to 60
- Compare and contrast the advantages of city living and country living. Defend your preference. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Furthermore
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Suggestion: Furthermore
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...like parks, museum, historic places. In my conclusion, I prefer living in count...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40721649485 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48502262422 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463917525773 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 556.2 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.1924964056 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8666666667 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133306974723 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522352873142 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432250689604 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940084444719 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448512152971 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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