Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
For every humans and living beings, the condition of the earth is really important for the better standard of living. however, as the times goes and the technology is improving, environment problem around us is becoming worse than the past. however, I believe that human activity is rather make the earth a better place to live with the few following statements.
To begin with, the effort of the people make the earth more productive and prosper. Since the young age, all the subjects and lessons they have learned are on the purpose of the better life. they are educated and self-reflected about the better future. If they are scientist, they are sure study about the technology which can produce high outcome with the low input. For the environment problem also, not only people are struggling to make cleaner environment around them but they also act as a environist which illuminate the industry company and citizen to consider pollution problem. For instance, in Sweden, with the government policy over 50 percents of citizen made campaign to take care of the environment around them. After a decade. the condition of the place, named Howea Lake,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However
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Suggestion: However
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'made'.
Suggestion: made
...I believe that human activity is rather make the earth a better place to live with t...
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Suggestion: They
... are on the purpose of the better life. they are educated and self-reflected about t...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...onment around them but they also act as a environist which illuminate the industr...
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Message: Consider using 'the surrounding environment'?
Suggestion: the surrounding environment
...f citizen made campaign to take care of the environment around them. After a decade. the condition of the p...
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ke care of the environment around them. After a decade. the condition of the place, n...
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Suggestion: The
...nvironment around them. After a decade. the condition of the place, named Howea Lak...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 43.0788530466 23% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 1977.66487455 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 193.0 407.700716846 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 4.48103885553 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56098009038 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 212.727598566 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60103626943 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 618.680645161 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.3084981604 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7272727273 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5454545455 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164966549582 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663172125759 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916109083385 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15525878283 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845288195813 0.0645574589148 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.